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Photo Credit: Michael Soskil

In my class we had to do a report on the five senses.  Here is my report on the five senses.

I just love Promised  Land Lake on a spring day.  I see the flowers blooming with color, the blue water shiny and bright, the green grass looks as if it's popping out.  When I put my feet into the water it feels slimy and cold then warm and relaxing.  I hear blue birds singing their soft song.  Fish are splashing in the water.  I smell the flowers all around me.  I touch the green algae with my feet.  I can taste the wild blueberries slightly sour and sweet.  That is the place for me on a spring day.

The photo above was taken by my dad when we went on a photo hike at Promised Land. 
 


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Beth
01/17/2012 16:52

Great job Abby!! I'm sure your teacher loved it!

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Mrs. Vandergrift
01/17/2012 16:55

I am so impressed with the imagery in your writing, I can almost imagine being at this lake with all your very vivid and colorful details. Keep up this amazing writing. I would love to see my 3rd graders writing in such great detail! Great work Abby!

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Anne
01/17/2012 17:09

You really painted a fabulous picture that brings out all the senses. As I read it, I felt like I was right there in the scene with you seeing, hearing, touching, and tasting. Fabulous!

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01/17/2012 17:14

What a beautiful picture you painted with your words. A lovely description using all your senses. Well Done.

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Barbara
01/17/2012 17:49

I agree Abby, all my senses are awakened when I'm at Promised Land State Park. My very favorite place to be. "My Happy Place".

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Mrs. Carroll
01/17/2012 19:32

Your attention to details and imagery, put me right at the lake with you! Beautiful job giving the reader a full picture of the serenity of the lake. (Although it makes me wish it was summer and not -5*!) Happy blogging!

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01/17/2012 20:01

Abby,
When I was reading this all of my senses were popping. I read each statement as though I was there experiencing what you were saying. You are greatly talented.

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Jayne
01/18/2012 00:32

Wow. Superb writing Abby. I am proud to be related to such a talented little lady!

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Wendy
01/18/2012 01:50

Nice job Abby, wish we were enjoy the words you wrote, soon :)

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Brett
01/20/2012 14:30

Another great blog! Keep them coming!!!

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